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	<title>Comments on: Writing on Writing: Simplify</title>
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		<title>By: Philip Yurchuk</title>
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		<dc:creator>Philip Yurchuk</dc:creator>
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		<description>Some time ago I picked up &quot;Style: Toward Clarity and Grace&quot; by Joseph Williams. It&#039;s chief complaint against Strunk and White is that it tells you what to do, but not how to do it. Williams creates something far more instructive; I saw the clarity of my writing improve dramatically after the first few chapters. Which is why, ahem, I&#039;ve never gone beyond that, although I have reread them. It looks like he&#039;s replaced it with two new books, a longer &quot;Lessons&quot; book and a more succinct &quot;Basics&quot; book.

Thanks for the pointer to Politics and the English Language. I&#039;d never read it before and found it entertaining and thoughtful. Some of the same lessons are mentioned in Style, but I think you have to reread these guidelines regularly to keep from forgetting, or as Orwell suggests, getting corrupted by other people&#039;s bad writing habits.</description>
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<p>Thanks for the pointer to Politics and the English Language. I&#8217;d never read it before and found it entertaining and thoughtful. Some of the same lessons are mentioned in Style, but I think you have to reread these guidelines regularly to keep from forgetting, or as Orwell suggests, getting corrupted by other people&#8217;s bad writing habits.</p>
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